Codename Cookie Short animation


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2 comments:

  1. cute! But two things for your consideration: I think her 2 jump sfx sound too obviously 'the same' - and she needs a proper, comedy crash when she falls out of sight - imagine that she's fallen onto a concealed bucket or stack of plates or similar - a great, old-fashioned comedy crash (though avoid the sound of breaking glass unless you want your audience to worry about Miri's wellbeing!) :)

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