René's Concept W.I.P

I was told this character doesn't seem unique which I can adress , however in this story he is not meant to stand out.

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  1. Did they say what was lacking?

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  2. No.
    Just that he seem an ordinary character that no doesn't seem unique.

    I think I'll find out 'what' was lacking.

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