W.I.P Script: The Adventures of Great Dane: The treasure Lighthouse

Adventures of Great Dane


  1. I'm not sure how well the "thinking bubble" works; maybe a flashback-style sequence would work better?

  2. I thought I couldn't make it a flash back per say because he has never achieved something like that before, so it wouldn't make much sense.
    I wanted a dream like sequence because it is him imagining what would happen after he got the treasure (futuretense)


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