Mother's Day Animatic w/Sound


at Friday, February 24, 2012
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  1. Alan Postings27 February 2012 at 06:48

    1) Put the photo of him as a small child on his desk (in frame) at the beginning amongst paperwork etc.

    2) Have him pick up the paperwork (and see the photo) before leaving.

    3) When he sees the picture on the shop door have him remember the photo.

    *Running theme throughout is now the photo (Ignoring it to remembering it).

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  2. Alan Postings27 February 2012 at 06:50

    4) We see the photo at the end (House)

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  3. Pixipui27 February 2012 at 07:55

    Ah ok like my mcguffin of the story
    (I had planned on having a picture on the desk at the beginning )

    I see how it would work better this way.
    Thanks, I'll re work the animatic as soon as possible.

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